This is for you if:
You film the reel, then freeze on the first line.(Pick a hook. Hit record. Done.)
Your reels die at 200 views.(It's not your video. It's your first 3 seconds.)
You copy trending hooks and they flop.(Everyone's already scrolled past them. You need hooks they haven't heard.)
You ramble before you get to the point.(One line. Straight in. Then yap.)
You hate sounding salesy.(These start comments, not pitches. The comments sell for you.)